Redo of picture 3

So after taking to some people and looking at the picture a while it seems to have yellow cast, so I tried to play around with it a little bit I like them both but I think the new one here is not so yellow. One day I will get this editing down :)

redo of picture 3 of 365

hopefully this one doesnt look bad, Ill come back and look at it again later need to let my eyes rest.